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Diamond's Application for Pilot enlisted Goji

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DefconGaming

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Your OOC name: Diamondjoust

Your In-Game Name: Diamond

Your SteamID: STEAM_0:1:113639246

What position are you applying for? Pilot enlisted Goji

What regiments are you currently apart of? Republic Pilots, The Jedi Order

How many hours do you have on Garry's Mod? 4263

How many hours do you have on the server? 887

Do you have any previous experience in a position like this? No i don't have really any experience being a lore character.

Why do you think you deserve this position: Because i have been active, helping troops in events,training's and tryouts.

What will you do in this position? I'll help more with tryouts, able to help para-drop training for 212th, Lead my newer and less experienced pilots and teach them tips and tricks.

Anything else:
 

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Very Short App
Need to be way more specific with all the written responses.
 

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Really Short App...
No Good Plans. You could do your plans without the lore character.

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This app looks like it was made in half a second, that says alot
 

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When applying for a lore position you want to express why you are the best person for the spot. People will look at your app. and determine if you are fit for the position after reading it. Having this said, if you really wanted the position you would put time and effort into it rather than "getting it over with." Another thing readers will look at is what you plan to do in the case that you get the character. They will look at if you have been able to do these things with or without the position. So next time when writing an application, take your time and focus on writing something that will make people want to +1.
 
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Short app
 

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Last two questions Revised.

Why do you think you deserve this position: I deserve this position because I've been very active on my pilot life. I've been in republic pilots for some time (around a month now). I've helped in pilot tryouts and training. I've gotten to know a lot of my NCO's and officers/commanders. I have some of the limited knowledge of Goji. I've generally had a great time in Republic pilots so far.

What will you do in this position? I'll help more with tryouts, able to help para-drop training for 212th, Lead my newer and less experienced pilots and teach them tips and tricks. Plus, hopefully i'll be able to get pilots even more active as it is.

I apologize for the short application earlier, I hope this makes up for it even partly.
 

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Seems to have plans.

Only thing not making it a full on plus one is we have not interacted very much.
However as always Good Luck!
 

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Changing to +1 after revision
 

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Changing to Neutral as you added some stuff but still really short
 

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-1 app is very short and you added more which i don’t think is enough.
No effort in the app
 

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Not alot of effort put into the app
Afk all the time


Even if goji is a pilot enlisted lore characher dosen't mean you have to put no effort into it.
When applying for a lore characher it shows how much effort you put into it showing how much you want it. i see no dedication reading the app looking it has barely been put in any effort. Good luck anyways hope this can help
 
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Pretty much every said it already, Short app looks like there is no effort
I don't see you on your pilot as much
 

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Sorry but this app is probably the shortest app I've seen yet and for that I don't see the strive to even be a lore character.

You're Active
You're a Good Pilot
 

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You were often AFK within 212th, don't recall many interactions with you cause of that
Rarely see you on your pilot
Don't see a given reason for why you should be a lore character

If you mean to actually get this lore character, please show it. Be more active on the server when you can, think about what being a lore character is about.
 

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Had issues withing pilots before
No real plans for the character
Doesn't show much of a want for the character either

If this is the same Diamond I'm thinking of, I believe you were kicked from multiple battalions in the past. In my eyes you don't seem to fit the criteria of being a lore character. Good luck.
 
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